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December'sRose
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 Posted: Mon Sep 01, 2008 1:11 am Post subject: Take Over (Dasey one-shot) |
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I just posted this one-shot on fanfiction.net. I was really hyper when I finished it this afternoon so I hope everyone likes it because I'm honestly pleased with the way it came out. Review if you'd like and I love constructive crit! 
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4511202/1/Take_Over
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ally6677
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I really liked the story!! I thought it was good and none of the charcters were ooc (I find hard to keep them in character, I do a horrible job) but your story was amazing!!
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December'sRose
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Thanks a bunch for reading! (still has to go to reply to your review on ff.net). I'm so glad you liked it! :3 Don't be fooled, I had such a hard time keeping Sally IC when I first wrote her so it took lots of practice. Same goes for all of the LwD characters. Thanks so much though, I'm so glad you enjoyed my one-shot!
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Immortalz3000
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That was wonderful! I read your fic on my sister's ipodtouch last night and I loved it! ally6677 was right, you did a great job on keeping everyone in character. the whole situation also seems like something that would happen on an episode, and maybe how dasey might have happened on the show... terrific job!
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December'sRose
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| Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2008 2:19 am Post subject: |
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Thank you !! I'm sorry for replying to your review late, but I really do appreciate it and I'm so glad you enjoyed my one-shot. 
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Immortalz3000
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No problemo. I been busy with college, havent been on here for a few weeks... hopefully I can read some more of your work when I have some free time.
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